A mistake?


It was a mistake
he sternly declared.

It was my goddamn fairy tale
her broken heart whispered.

Pratishtha πŸ™‚


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31 thoughts on “A mistake?”

  1. 😣 I don’t understand why it happens. If the person wasn’t sure, why did he/she in the first place proposed! He/she wasn’t forced to be in a relationship!
    Good morning…. Have a blissful day.

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    1. Exactly.
      They say i love you,make promises,pretend like we are all they need and then one day suddenly they leave.Shattering all our dreams,our hopes,our happiness.And at that point,when they leave,they just don’t give a damn about our feelings.
      We girls feel too deeply,we get devoted to that one person,but all their words turn out to be a sham.
      And what is left behind,is tears,memories and a broken heart.😣
      You too,have a happy day.😊

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  2. But you know what the boys also say same…
    Any many times I found the girls not loyal…
    Pyaar ,Mohabbat and than mai tumse shadi nh kar skti
    Mere gharwale nahi manenge….
    Don’t think I’m favouring boys
    I’m a girl….

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    1. Yes,this happens too.
      Gender doesn’t matter,anyone can break hearts,girls and boys alike.πŸ˜…
      But the thing is,whoever does this,he/she is wrong.Promises krne hi nhi chaiye agar nibha nhi skte and our generation needs to understand that! πŸ™‚

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      1. Correct…
        But human sentiments are the most difficult thing to understand..
        Actually the person in true love should have the courage and that’s the only way one can fulfil the promises…

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  3. kahan aa ke rukte thay rastay kahan morh tha usay bhool ja
    jo mil gaya ussay yaad rakh jo nahi mila usay bhool ja
    wo tary naseeb ki barishain kisi or chat pe baras gain
    dil-e-bekhabar meri baat sun usay bhool ja usay bhool ja
    mein to gham tha tairay khayal mein teri aas mein teray gumaan mein
    sabah keh gai mairay kaan mein mairay sath aa usay bhool ja
    kisi aankh mein nahi hai ashk gham taray baad kuch nahi hai kam
    tujhe zindagi nay bhula diya to bhee muskura usay bhool ja
    na woh aankh teri hee aankh thee na khawab tera khawab tha
    dil-e-muntazar to yeh kaisa tera jaagna usay bhool ja
    woh jo bastay jaan hi ulat gaya woh jo rastay se hee palat gaya
    usay rokne se hasil kya usay mat bulaa usay bhool ja
    tujhe chaand ban ke mila tha jo tere sahilon pe khila tha jo
    woh tha ik darya wasaal ka so woh utar gaya usay bhool ja

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  4. Koi ladka hota to bolta ki welcome to the bevda club, tumko dilasa bhi kya dein, best you can do is write poetry on heart breaks and aches, that you’re already doing. Sympathies with you, hope you grow stronger with this passing phase.


    1. Oye oye oye!!
      M not a depressed lover!
      Haha!! And nothing much happened,these lil things don’t break me.I feel upset for a while,write it out and basss khatam.Dusri bar aansu nhi nikalte same reason pe.
      Mae toh abhi dance kr ri thi thodi der phle πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ not gonna cry behind someone who lost me.πŸ˜‰
      You know,exaggeration is there when you pen down something,to make it look more heartfelt.πŸ˜…
      Ap naa,vo hassaane wale comments hi kia kro😁 M perfectly fine and no more heartache poetry ab!

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    2. Wese mko ab samjh aya k yeh sab parhke people will feel like m so broken and depressed,while m not.πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      Mae toh acchi bhali hun.πŸ˜…
      Ese hi ye sb likh deti hun,ab ni krungi…πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

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      1. Like I said yesterday, heart aches are part of life, hona hi hai. Good thing is to endure and move ahead, if you keep on thinking over it only, neither would you move forward nor will you attain any growth. Do char poem likh ke aagey badh jane ka 😊 Ussi dharre mein typecast nahi ho jane ka

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  5. Fairy tales doesn’t always meant to give you what you desire sometime the one fairy tale you choose to write will give you the lessons to for the fairy tale chosen by that destiny..:) Those are just 4 lines displayed but it held emotions that will haunt for 40years and beyond every bad things bring us closer to something we deserve ..:)

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