It was his mistake,he just abruptly changed,
they argued and their relation was strained,
but she hoped,like every other time
he would call her and apologize,
and take her heart away,again
She hoped that like every other time
he would text her incessantly,until she smiles and forgives him
She waited,waited for hours
Phone beeped,she thought it was him
she hastily picked it up,but damn,
it was not a message from her sweetheart.
She kept waiting for hours,
why didn’t he text this very time?
Has something changed between the two?
Did he not care anymore?
Is he not aware of the fact that he had hurt her?
Did he,her insane lover,not love her anymore?
She cried for hours,never letting him know,though
and texted herself in the end,
I am sorry,I love you.
Pratishtha 🙂
Sounds cute
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Heartbreaking😅
Thankyou 🙂
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Hehehe I didn’t want to step on the negative pedal so said it cute 😝
Jo hona tha wo ho hi chuka hai, kuch badalna to hai nahi, to usko aur gumgeen na kiya jaye yehi koshish thi 😊
Pleasure 😊
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heheheh
Heard of the quote-
That’s the thing about pain,it demands to be felt.-TFIOS😊
So gam ko feel puri trha kr lena chahiye,this was not fictional though.😅
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Felt the pain and realized it wasn’t fictional and that’s why tried to churn your mood to gay 😝
You felt it, you expressed it but I don’t see the point on sympathising you and taking you back to the same pain again.
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Agreed! 😝
You’ve always cheered me up on my sad posts,hehe,thanks 😆
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Pleasure 😊
Stay blessed 🙏😇
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You too.😇
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Thanks 😊
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It was sweet ! Aww 😀 and sad also 😦
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😅 Thankyou so much! 😊
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But must sat you write so beautiful. Thank you 🙂
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I am overwhelmed!
Thanks a lot !!! 😊😘
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Hahah i know that feeling! And it’s my pleasure 😉
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😉😊
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Say*
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Wow..that was some broken poem….😅
Still you measured and wrote it so well…..heart melting one ✌
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Thankyou so much Mr.Patel 😊
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My pleasure pratishtha ✌👑☺
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Beautifully drafted!!!The emotions of longing and heart-break were so vivid..
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I’m glad you could fathom the meaning behind it.Longing it is.
Thankyou so much!! 😊
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It would not have taken any rocket science to decipher it,it just takes experience ^_^
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Exactly.😅😊
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:p
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Babe, Pratishtha, nothing changed, everything will make a way.
It is just the tide that will fade away.
Just don’t lose hopes and stand strong in lieu,
At the end, I would say, I too love you.
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I hope!
Hehe aww!
So sweet of you.😘😊
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Remember, end tak sab theek ho jaata hai. Agar nehi hua toh wo ending nehi hai.
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Agreed! 😊
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This so beautifully penned sad emotions👌👏…A message won’t changes whatever is in hearts,wet eyes will bring kohl down nothing much..may be its a wait of some hours or story of life keep patience cheer up & feel the love’s touch🙏
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Umm,yeah 😅
Thankyou Prashant! 😊
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Nicely done. :))
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Thankyou!! 😊
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It is a little heart breaking when ego comes into play. But call it wonderful because atlas one of them weighed love over ego.
Beautiful flow of emotions , nicely crafted. 🙂
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Yes!! 😊
Love must overpower ego and even if just one of the two in a relationship understand this,the relation can be saved!
Thankyou so much!! 😊😄
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I can relate this , you are correct ..
Though, it was just the other way round … I tried my best and still trying to apologize and to whom her heart but I presume my best was not good enough, am not that worthy when I compare myself with her!!
Great post.. Should I still hope and wait is the question.. The answer lies deep inside my heart!!
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I’m glad you could relate!!
Thanks a lot!
I always look forward to your responses to my posts.😊
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Thanks a lot..
It means a lot.. someone waiting for my response is just something I can never thought of..
Thank you
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Oh my pleasure! 😊
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thank you so very much !!
i really have no words for this! 🙂
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😊😊😊
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:):):)
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She is a big fool ,let first decide whose mistake it was ,if its him ,he must apologize ,she will be exploited now every time
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Sir,he did apologize everytime before this incident,even when it was not his mistake and she never exploited him.
So if this time she apologized without being at fault,he wont.
Love does not see these barriers of whose mistake it was,ego should not be allowed to ruin a relationship.To save it,anyone may apologize.And the guy loves her,she is aware enough that he wont expect her to go behind him everytime.
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Very kiddish approach and if in past he apologized without mistakes ,he has no self respect ,he should be in relationship
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😂😂😂
In love,self respect,ego…These things matter very less.
What matters is,the love,the relation.Which has to be saved at any cost!
And,i respect the person who sacrifices self-respect to save his relation.
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I guess a person without self respect is worse than dead
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I am a girl,cheerful,buoyant…Who believes in seeing the positive side of everything,appreciating others.And im very happy with my thought process.
You are a man who would call my thoughts childish,immature…You see the negative side of it,stern n practical.
We are disparate.
Thanks for your comments,someone dissents with my thoughts,m glad,i notice how people like you see the world differently.
Cheers! 😉
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Cheers to you too
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purely expressed with beautiful poetry….
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Thankyou so much!! 😄
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may u like to take a look https://neemkapaudha.wordpress.com/2016/04/19/losers-need-to-be-identified/
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I’ll surely go through your blog in the morning. 🙂
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Well written bae👏😊
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Thankyou Inayat!! 😘
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You’re such an enthusiastic soul,i have came across so many people blaming life for being here your thanking life for even harsh lessons..:) Glad to have known you from WordPress..:)
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Enthusiastic soul…This describes me very well. 🙂
You will find me smiling always.
I like to focus on the luminous side of life.
Thankyou 😊
Same here.
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🙂
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