He broke her heart
into infinite pieces
Every promise he made
turned out to be a deception
His every word
turned out to be artificial
But her frail heart had
an unshakable conviction
in his falsely beautified utterances
Until one day
when she stepped out of her
deaf and blind belief in him
She realized
that he,the man she thought
she belonged to
never intended to make her his
Her innocent heart
had been the victim of a hoax
Those sugar-coated words
long,deep coversations
his smile,his eyes,his love
was all a sham
She felt as if
she was an exuberant bird
who just got her wing broken in the mid of a flight
and as if she’s falling from a great height
and she’s in a dillema
whether to wail for the wing she has lost
or compose herself and prevent the fall
She could feel an agony
that words cannot describe
Her heart that emitted love
only for him
was paralysed
She wanted to hit and crush
his gorgeous face
that once shone in her eyes like a glittery twinkling star
She felt like destroying his
ever-so-captivating eyes,his
darn adorable dimples,his
alluring,pink lips,his
immaticulate-curly hair,his
baby-soft cheeks and his
heart which was just a synonym for stone,now
But she could not even gather
the grit
to accuse him for crushing the heart that loved him
She just smiled at him
whispered a thankyou for the good times they shared
and left
never making him feel guilty of what he did,of the blunder he commited
leaving
some emotions unexpressed
some deeds undone
some words unsaid…
Pratishtha 🙂
Nice one.. 🙂 these emotions make so much sense to me… You’ve inked them in a surreal manner.. 🙂
Great job done as always. (Y)
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Thankyou Krati,i just wrote what i felt😅😊
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This is so intense it made me stop my work and read it! Great piece of poetry! Stay blessed girl x
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Oh this means a lot!
Thankyou so much!
M glad you liked it.😊😘
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Deserving! Pleasure is all mine beautiful 💕
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😊😘🙈
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Hawwww!! 😮😮😮
Pari! Kya hua?? 😰
This is so painful, so full of emotions, I can feel those words! 😶
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Kuch bhi nahi Chanduuu🙈
Bas aise hi generally likha hae,nothing personal😅😊
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Then it’s really intense yaar! Truly appreciable! 😇😇
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Thankyouuu Chanduuu😊😘
And yar vo come n find me wali likh hi nhi payi mae 😂😂😂 aya nhi kuch dimag mein….Apni wali toh post krdo 😍
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😂😂😂
Arey koi baat nai, usse achhi achhi toh likh di tune! 😊😊
Haan, chal mai kar dungi post! 😅
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Heheh han okay ! 😊
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Is it just a sisterhood thing? Males not allowed to comment or what? 🤔🤔
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You just commented Dhiraj,and you’re a male na! So males are allowed to comment,surely.
But i have more female followers probably and they can relate to my emotions.😉😊
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😝😝😝
Yeh sahi hai ki dard sirf females ko hota hai isliye wo relate kar sakte hain, gajab logic hehehe 👌👌👌
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I never said that 😂
I meant that these lovely girls who commented,could relate,you can too.
Obviously males ko bhi hota hae,they get their hearts broken too.And there’s nothing as such,that males cannot comment here,absurd thought hae😅
Certainly you can😊
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Hahaha sorry sorry I was just trying to pull that gloomy cloud aside created after such a touching poem. Honestly very deep. 👌
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Hahah 😂😂😂
Thankyou 😊
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Pleasure:)
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🙂
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Wow this is so emotional, and touching Pratishtha. It was so beautiful as how you expressed the girl would feel. The words you used to carve this poem is very beautiful, loved it ❤
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Thankyou so much Shri! 😘😊
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The poem was really great, so no need to say thanks , the pleasure was mine 🙂 🙂
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Awwww🙈😊 have a good day 😊
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Thanks you too have a great day 🙂 🙂
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Touching !!
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Thankyou! 😊
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You have written it with so true emotions! ❤
I can relate to each and every part of it and one of my writings.
The Broken Friendship – http://wp.me/p7gtbj-O
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Thankyou Shreya 🙂
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wish i could press the like button twice
love surely has this strength i presume
god bless you and thanks for sharing !!!
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Oh thankyou so much! 😊
Im glad you liked my words. 🙂
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it’s my pleasure completely
it was a treat to read such post stuffed with emotions !!
god bless you and tc!!
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Aww thankyou! 😊
God bless u too 🙂
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thank you 🙂
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Heartbreakingly beautiful! Such intense emotions. 👍🏼😊
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Thanks a lot!
These emotions,when felt,are easy to pen down.😊
Im glad you liked it.😊
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But not everyone are able to express it beautifully 😀
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Hey, I have nominated you for Sunshine Blogger Award. I hope to see your participation. ❤
Sunshine Blogger Award – http://wp.me/p7gtbj-2t
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So beautifully written…emotions 👍
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Thankyou so much 😊
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Beautifully written… Please checkout my blog.
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Thank you!
Sure 🙂
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She is fool ,who couldn’t judge people and over that she let go that guy without punishing him , pity
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There’s no punishment in love Ajay.She does not regret.And if judging people was so easy,no heart would ever be broken.
She is just a lover,and true love does not seek revenge.
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There is no true love and everything is fair in love and war , love is a war
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Ab jisko nahi mila true love,uske liye theres no true love,jisko mila,he knows what it is.
I respect what you think,sir. ✌
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How can you say that you got it and other’s haven’t
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I never said that.
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You only said ,if someone hasn’t got and others have
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I said someone…I never said its me.I just meant k who will get true love will believe in it and who wont,will not believe.
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Adamant
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You are,i know.
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Thanks
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Profound aristry over words,reminds me of one my penned short story with female protagonist…👏👏
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Thanks a lot!! 😊
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So beautiful! I was really touched by your words ❤
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Thankyou so much! 😊
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