And then i could see her,so full of life.She wore a childish smile throughout the day,looking beautiful ad tantalizing on the outside.
Her face so serene,her eyes,glittering and shimmering like the stars that illuminate the dark sky,her cheeks,soft as cotton and her teeth,adorably crooked,and her short hair dancing on her shoulders as she gracefully grooved to the music she was listening.She looked beautiful.
That’s the way every eye saw her.But as i stepped a little closer,trying to recreate her picture in my heart,my heart’s eyes enlarged,blinked rapidly-my heart could see through her soul,which no other eyes could dig into.
Her oh-so-beautifully-Indian-crooked-tooth-smile didn’t touch her eyes.She imposed it on her lips forcefully,not letting anyone see through the dazzling bright smile of hers,underneath which were her darkest fears.
My heartbeat quickened as i moved my eyes up,to look at her glittering,kohl-rimmed eyes.They were like an unsolved mystery.I stared right in her eye,trying to gaze as deep as possible and in a fraction of second,i could see what no one did.
There was a glint of sadness,pain and desperation,DESPERATION FOR HAPPINESS!
I saw the unshed tears that strained hard not to pour out on her beautifully carved cheek bones but craving to be unleashed and burst out.
And through her eyes and her smile,i witnessed her damaged soul.All it took,to see through her,was a little care and understanding!
She still had that smile nicely curved on her red-full-lips and she winked her eyes as they met mine. I could read the little secret they carried,the signal her eyes conveyed,which was-
A demand
A desire
A craving
A longing
for happiness!!
Pratishtha π
Wowwww!!! My God, this was wonderful! ππβ€
This is seriously amazing yaar! I love it! ππβ
Keep writing, I like the way you choose your words, the description seems lively! π
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Thankyouuuuu so much Chandu!!πππ itni tareefπππ mai sharmaaa gayiπππ
And i kinda portrayed myself in itπ hehe,i have crooked teeth(which are not at all cute -.-)and shoulder-length hair and a longing for happiness! π π
M glad u liked it ππ
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Hahha, achha! Laga tha mujhe aisa kuch, ki you portrayed yourself! π
And crooked teeth, hehe! Koi na, chalta hai! ππ
Shoulder length hair are definitely the cutest of all! β€π
Yess, I loved it! Keep writing beautifully! ππ
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Heheheh yeah! πππ
Ap bhi keep writing beautifully! πππ
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Haanji, thankyou for the wishes, I’ll try my best! πππ
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Pratishtha that short hair & crooked teeth makes you look soo god damn beautiful.. π great post πππ
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Awwwwππ Krati you made me smileπππ Sooo sweet of you to say that. Thankyou so much babeπππ
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u are always welcome swetheart.. ππππππ m glad i could make u smile..ππ
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Love the way you have described “that girl”
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Thankyou so much Maheshπ
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Just perfect !! β
Lovveeed that girl π
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A never ending hope
An undying faith
And trust in her love
made her even more
beautiful..:)
such an piece of writing..:) Loved it..:)
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Thankyou so much!!! ππ
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That’s wonderful
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Thankyou! π
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wilcome π
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lovely……and description….I loved it
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Thankyou Anagha ππ
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Beautiful..
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Thankyou so much! π
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Its a bummer to see (feel) how beautifully you have put down emotions.
I recently met a girl, quite similar to the girl you have described. It is wonderful when a writer can work back every scene into the readers mind. I just saw her again. Thank you.
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Oh thankyou so much!
M glad you liked it! π
I’ve described myself,hehe π
So you met a girl like me,interesting.π
I’m happy that my words could make you visualize her again.Thanks! π
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Thats interesting. So thats more of a self portrait. I must say you are beautiful then.
Keep writing and conjure things back to life like you already have.
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Self portrait…Not actually…But i’ll work on a self portrait soonπ This was just a slight reflection of what i am.I’ll add details soon.
And thankyou.π
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Beautifully done, nonehteless. Looking forward to it π
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