That girl! 😍😊


And then i could see her,so full of life.She wore a childish smile throughout the day,looking beautiful ad tantalizing on the outside.
Her face so serene,her eyes,glittering and shimmering like the stars that illuminate the dark sky,her cheeks,soft as cotton and her teeth,adorably crooked,and her short hair dancing on her shoulders as she gracefully grooved to the music she was listening.She looked beautiful.

That’s the way every eye saw her.But as i stepped a little closer,trying to recreate her picture in my heart,my heart’s eyes enlarged,blinked rapidly-my heart could see through her soul,which no other eyes could dig into.

Her oh-so-beautifully-Indian-crooked-tooth-smile didn’t touch her eyes.She imposed it on her lips forcefully,not letting anyone see through the dazzling bright smile of hers,underneath which were her darkest fears.

My heartbeat quickened as i moved my eyes up,to look at her glittering,kohl-rimmed eyes.They were like an unsolved mystery.I stared right in her eye,trying to gaze as deep as possible and in a fraction of second,i could see what no one did.

There was a glint of sadness,pain and desperation,DESPERATION FOR HAPPINESS!

I saw the unshed tears that strained hard not to pour out on her beautifully carved cheek bones but craving to be unleashed and burst out.

And through her eyes and her smile,i witnessed her damaged soul.All it took,to see through her,was a little care and understanding!

She still had that smile nicely curved on her red-full-lips and she winked her eyes as they met mine. I could read the little secret they carried,the signal her eyes conveyed,which was-
A demand
A desire
A craving
A longing
for happiness!!

Pratishtha πŸ™‚


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27 thoughts on “That girl! 😍😊”

  1. Wowwww!!! My God, this was wonderful! 😍😍❀
    This is seriously amazing yaar! I love it! πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡βœŒ
    Keep writing, I like the way you choose your words, the description seems lively! πŸ˜‹

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    1. Thankyouuuuu so much Chandu!!😘😘😘 itni tareef😍😍😍 mai sharmaaa gayiπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ
      And i kinda portrayed myself in itπŸ˜‚ hehe,i have crooked teeth(which are not at all cute -.-)and shoulder-length hair and a longing for happiness! πŸ˜…πŸ˜Š
      M glad u liked it 😊😘

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      1. Hahha, achha! Laga tha mujhe aisa kuch, ki you portrayed yourself! πŸ˜…
        And crooked teeth, hehe! Koi na, chalta hai! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
        Shoulder length hair are definitely the cutest of all! ❀😍
        Yess, I loved it! Keep writing beautifully! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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  2. Its a bummer to see (feel) how beautifully you have put down emotions.
    I recently met a girl, quite similar to the girl you have described. It is wonderful when a writer can work back every scene into the readers mind. I just saw her again. Thank you.

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    1. Oh thankyou so much!
      M glad you liked it! 😊
      I’ve described myself,hehe πŸ˜‚
      So you met a girl like me,interesting.πŸ˜„
      I’m happy that my words could make you visualize her again.Thanks! 😊

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      1. Self portrait…Not actually…But i’ll work on a self portrait soon😊 This was just a slight reflection of what i am.I’ll add details soon.
        And thankyou.😊


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